At first glance, Oscar Wilde's "The
Picture of Dorian Gray" might appear as a novel of unnecessarily elaborate
dialogues that lack the clear purpose of leading the storyline.
After all, when Lord Henry talks to Dorian
for the purpose of persuading and charming him, he sites beautifully, but wickedly
distorted quotes to convey his points. Since his phrases are so long and sometimes
contain incomprehensible humors, the readers get tired of seemingly pointless
digressions. However, knowing about the writer's life and what he fought
against for all of his later life, the elaborate dialogues do not appear only
as 'pointless digressions'.
The value Oscar Wilde considered important
was 'beauty', in other words, 'aesthetics'. In the Victorian age, every 'moral'
thing had a purpose; for instance, sexual intercourse was to produce offspring,
not to get pleasure.
Oscar Wilde, as the one who loved men and
criticized what people said as 'immorality', played with his sweetly flowing
dialogues to hide hints of homosexuality, to wake the readers' senses, and to
'please' readers. Therefore, it is perhaps more accurate to assume that the
enormous amount of seemingly useless sentences convey more meanings than
readers would normally predict; such as the longing for beauty and distaste for
morality. In this sense, the ironies and humors Lord Henry created, for
example: "I have a theory that it is always the women who propose to us,
and not we who propose to the women. Except, of course, in middle-class life.
But then the middle classes are not modern."
altogether seem like a digression from main point, reminding reader of the murmuring of unimportant parts, but actually the casual intention of Oscar Wilde, to hint his thoughts and philosophy in the novel.
altogether seem like a digression from main point, reminding reader of the murmuring of unimportant parts, but actually the casual intention of Oscar Wilde, to hint his thoughts and philosophy in the novel.
Much better than your first draft, and very flowing ideas that add up nicely. Formatting is a bit choppy (it's supposed to be ONE paragraph) and you do need to be more careful with minor grammatical errors. Towards the end:
답글삭제not modern."
altogether seem like a digression from main point, reminding reader of the murmuring of unimportant parts, but actually the casual intention of Oscar Wilde, to hint his thoughts and philosophy in the novel.
Formatting issues with the quote and why the separate line? And reminding "reader"? You write well enough to avoid these kinds of things.
That said, I like the direction and agree wholly with the ideas you put forward. The novel is very personal and quite inflated with ideas somewhat unrelated to the gothic plot. You clearly appreciate the book and understand literature well. Just need to brush up on thoroughness.